Kia ora welcome or welcome back to my blog this week one of our tasks was to do a diagram on a fresh lunchbox turning into a disgusting mouldy lunchbox. The idea was that the mouldy lunchbox you made in your diagram would look something a full lunchbox if you left it in your school bag for a couple weeks or so. We did this because as you know if you saw my blog from last week that my literacy group is doing stuff all about food technology. Check out my diagram below. Have you done a diagram before if you have what was it about let me know in he comments below.
Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, September 3, 2021
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Kia ora Elsie,
ReplyDeletethat is such a good Diagram it looks good it explains what's happening in the pitcher,and to answer your question I have done a diagram on the same thing that yours is on and other things.
See you next time.
Evie
Kia ora Elsie, this diagram is very clear on what would happen in your lunch box! I wonder what would go mouldy first out of all those foods?
ReplyDeleteKia ora Elsie, I think you did a good job on making it but it sounds gross. I do the same topic too, have you had mouldy food in your lunch box?
ReplyDeleteFrom Delilah.