Kia ora welcome or welcome back to my blog. In literacy we had to do a google slide about ANZAC day Mrs Kerin my teacher gave us lots of activities to choose from and put them on a slide. This is mine. In the comments can you give me some feedback if you would like. Have a great day!
Source: Google slides
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hi Elsie this is Annie, maybe next time you could do a more of a catchy title, and also the background that you used did hurt my eyes to see and I only saw the fist slide but other than that it was great!
ReplyDeleteKia ora Elsie,
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your Anzac work with the world. I really enjoyed reading the information. I wondered what it was that surprised you about the first Anzac service being held in 1923. I know it surprised me because that was a few years after the first world war finished.
Something that could make your slides even more engaging than this one is by adding images or perhaps you could record your voice reading some of your slides out.
Keep up the great learning and blogging,
:) Sharon - Te Ara Tūhura Education Programme Leader