Kia ora welcome or welcome back to my blog. For literacy we had to do a writing piece from the Once-ler to the Lorax. This is mine, I hope you like it. In the comments give me some ideas on how to improve my writing. Have a good day ,bye.
Friday, May 7, 2021
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I love your writing because your rhyme bits are amazing
ReplyDeletehi Elsie its me Emmy I love your letter to the ones-ler its so possessive maybe next time think of a catcher title. well done from Emmy.
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